In the above paper [1] , the detectability of topology variations in dynamical networks is studied. This note points out that [1, Proposition 2 and Th. 4], which provide network-theoretic conditions for discerning topology variations, require a stronger assumption than controllability of the subsystem dynamics.

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评论“检测线性动力系统网络中的拓扑变化”

在以上论文中 [1] ，研究了动态网络中拓扑变化的可检测性。本注释指出[1，命题2和Th。[4]为区分拓扑变化提供了网络理论条件，需要比子系统动力学的可控制性更强的假设。